Hons pres4 lmcs_0901821_copy from mcsheff90
Above is my presentation, my notes can be downloaded at https://www.box.com/s/wiwwvsdi0zbrffd14g1u
Like I said, I was more worried about this presentation that any other one, purely because of everything that had gone wrong in the lead up to it. However, I got some really good feedback!
Ryan really liked the direction I was taking with it, he said the States of Mind idea was explored well and in a good place to take further and explore in different ways visually. He also said it was a big relief that I'd established this connection between the states of mind and the stories to drive them.
The only criticisms were that the lighting wasn't quite right in the scenes I'd showcased, but I already knew this and have said previously that these were not final renders but works in progress.
Final piece needs to be spoken about ASAP to determine what I'm actually making. Basically, it's all gonna be hard work from this point but the more I produce, the more I can crit.
Above is my presentation, my notes can be downloaded at https://www.box.com/s/wiwwvsdi0zbrffd14g1u
Like I said, I was more worried about this presentation that any other one, purely because of everything that had gone wrong in the lead up to it. However, I got some really good feedback!
Ryan really liked the direction I was taking with it, he said the States of Mind idea was explored well and in a good place to take further and explore in different ways visually. He also said it was a big relief that I'd established this connection between the states of mind and the stories to drive them.
The only criticisms were that the lighting wasn't quite right in the scenes I'd showcased, but I already knew this and have said previously that these were not final renders but works in progress.
Final piece needs to be spoken about ASAP to determine what I'm actually making. Basically, it's all gonna be hard work from this point but the more I produce, the more I can crit.
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